Phases such as I supported the change process or I assisted with financial planning for the company leave the admission officer none the wiser as to what you were actually doing. Make it clear what your contribution was. For example:
..The position involved analysing past financial performance to identify areas for future improvement and preparing budgets to ensure sound financial planning
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